My play “1733” requires significant work. I’m aiming for an adaptation that dram
My play “1733” requires significant work. I’m aiming for an adaptation that dramatizes the events of the 1733 rebellion of St. John, similar to what is being done with the new series “SHOGUN”.
I possess a significant play that needs refinement. It is crucial to ensure the play somewhat reflects real events, but I also want to present it dramatically. I plan to use proper English mixed with Crucian dialect and slang, so the draft requires reworking to enhance the narrative flow from start to finish. The aim is to improve the storyline, storytelling, dialogue, grammar, phrases, words, events, scenes, and characters. I want the story to progress from the middle to the end in a capable manner that weaves a beautiful, heart-wrenching tale where each character’s background is utilized, and their conclusion brings a distinct payoff. The file is attached.
PT 2
My play, currently untitled, is a romantic comedy set in the USVI, focusing on Transfer Day between a Danish native and an American soldier. I’m still deciding on the timeline—whether it will start before, during, or in the days leading up to Transfer Day. It’s a blend of romance and comedy, and I want to highlight our cultural traditions—how we marry, sing, and dance to Quelbe music, our calypso, our culture wears of madras really it just an amazing piece. It’s a moving piece, inspired by Broadway romantic comedies. Essentially, it’s about two contrasting cultures coming together, incorporating elements of Bridgerton—representing American culture—clashing with Caribbean norms, culminating in the union of two souls. i have a draft but it in need of tlc its needs have lots of acts so it needs a ton ofc draft work
also when it comes to Private James please take out the stupid Shakespeare idea not good or the Boardway thing hate it need real work done on them more charcyers there bios and there contnent needed
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